Monday, December 21, 2009

Reflection 4

a) The compare and contrast

In this essay we should compare and contrast (find similarities and differences) two things like city and villages, or two countries or two states.

b) we should write three paragraphs, in the first one we write what the two things will be compare and contrast it. second paragraph we should write the similarities between the two things. The third prographs we should write differences (contrast) between the two things. last and fourth paragraph we should write our opinion what we prefer.

c) The first prograph should be bief, just 20 words. The second and the third should be 140 words. the last prograph should be 40 words.

Reflection 3

Present passive is used in process essays with( is and are and the) past participle and it has the same structure of the procedure as introduction , main paragraph and conclusion . And it contains about 150 words with linking words the same as procedure ( first , second , next , after that and finally).

Reflection 2

a) writing the story is very intersting and very important for student. The student can improve their writing skills and have a fuuny time when they do it.


b) In story we should write all verbs in past simple and past perfect. And we use the past form because everything happened in past and we just write about it.



c) In this type of writing we should write one paragraph only, and it should be 200 words.

Reflection 1

a) In writing procedure we should write 3 paragraph. At first the intruduction should be 20-30 words, and the main body of essay fhould be 90-100 words, and the concolusion should be 20-30 words.


b) we should remember to use linking words like first, after that, then, next and finally.


c) we should remember to use the infinitive form, and follow the steps on flow charts and we can put more information of the subject.

Sunday, December 20, 2009

Compare and Contrast Abu Dhabi and Baniyas

In this essay I will compare and contrast living in Abu Dhabi and living in Baniyas.

The first similarity is the weather. The weather in Abu Dhabi is hot and dry and the same weather is in Bniyas. The second similarity is houses. The houses in Abu Dhabi are modern and big and the same thing in Baniyas. The third similarity is people. In Abu Dhabi and Baniyas the local people are Emiratis. The final similarity is education. In Abu Dhabi the education is very good and so are the schools, the same thing in Baniyas the education is good and so are the schools.

After similarities I will write the differences. The first difference is lifestyle. In Abu Dhabi the lifestyle is working , busy and active but in Baniyas the lifestyle is simple and quiet. The second difference is the condition of streets. In Abu Dhabi the streets are large but very crowded and very noisy, but in Baniyas the streets are good and the crowd is rare and not like Abu Dhabi . The final difference is facilities. In Abu Dhabi the facilities are better than Baniyas and thats a many types of services.

In summary the differences are more than the similarities. Abu Dhabi is modern and has everything to live in it but I prefer Baniyas because I have livde in it most my life.

Sunday, November 8, 2009

The car accident

Three days ago I had an accident in Abu Dhabi. Ten to seven in the morning was when the accident happened. I was driving to ADMC (Abu Dhabi Men's College) and I came early. I reached Al Sada street and on the corner I saw a car stopped. I pressed the brake to stop, but the brake wasn’t working at first. I pressed it again strongly to stop because the situation was very hard, but the brake again didn’t work. I felt terrible and tried a third time to stop, this time I was successful. But I was shocked that the car was stopped. The other car driver got out the car and asked me if I was fine. I answered yes, but there was big damage to my car. But the other car hadn’t any damage. We called the police and discovered the accident place. The Saed bikes came and asked us to stop at one next parking. After that he started planning the accident and he asked me what happened. I told him what happened exactly and he said ‘Praise be to God for safety’. After all I called my father and told him what happened to the car. He came and took the car to the garage for repairs.

Sunday, October 25, 2009

My Story Contest

Four years ago I entered “My Story Contest” and got second place. The contest was for those between eleven years old and fifteen years old. The contest was to write a story by yourself and give it to the jury, and we have one month for this. At first I didn’t like to join the contest, because I thought it had no value. After three days my father came and said ‘why you don’t enter to the contest, the contest has a big value. Enter and you will discover this value”. I decided to enter the contest to discover the value, I worked hard for twenty days. I spent there days writing, putting and re-ordering the ideas...